Alone in a Room

You’re walking and it rains, you need to find shelter, but once there you feel you’re being watched. By whom? Or more importantly, by what? (vampire story; for girls; very long)
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1. The Storm- You come home one autumn evening and feel itchy for action...you can't stay still and are constantly moving. You decide to go for a walk. When heading out the door you grab your favorite sweatshirt, a scarf and a pair of gloves. After you put those on you grab your I-pod and cell phone and head out the door. Eventually you get lost in your music and walk to the tempo. Your I-pod dies and you look down to see that the batteries have run out. You take it out of your ears and put it in your pocket. All the sudden you start to feel a light drizzle, quicker than a wink the sky turns black and dismal and rain starts pelting down. You turn around and start jogging. It's raining so hard that you can hardly see the street below you. You see a small light a little ways ahead and run towards it. Once you reach it you bound up three old rickety stairs which leads to a porch. You lean over and put your hands on your knees. You’re panting for breath while the cold air stings your lungs. You straighten up and look around you. It's dark and the rain is still pouring, you’re standing on a wooden porch that looks like it's going to collapse under your feet. The paint is fading and there is a door to your left. Its handle looks rusted and the roof is leaking. The shutters on the two windows are slanted and the window themselves are cracked and grimy. You’re blinded by a flash of lighting and you hear a loud CRACK!!! You pull out your cell phone and find that there are no bars.

2. Figment- You swear and put your cell phone back in your pocket. You look around you once more. You head over to the door and knock on it. No one answers. You try again, but again no one answers. You grab the door knob and turn it, cautiously you open the door. It squeals, protesting the movement and you wince. Once inside you can only see pitch black. Lightning briefly lightens the room, with a loud BOOM following after it. In that brief flash you saw that you where in a living room of sorts. The room is huge. In the far right corner was a large flat screen TV with a couch directly in front of it, two chairs on either side of the couch, facing each other, surrounding a coffee table. In the corner to your left there was a spiral staircase and a door off to the side. In the corner to your right was another door and in the far left corner where two pairs of red eyes that makes the hair on the back of your neck rise and a shiver pass through your body. You hear a soft chuckle behind you in your left ear and let out a squeak of fright and you can feel your heart start to beat rapidly. Another flash of light and then a BOOM, but this time the eyes aren’t there. You hear the door creak and then shut behind you. You blindly fumble in search for a light switch. Once you feel it you quickly flip it. This causes the chandelier above you to turn on and temporarily blind you until your eyes adjust. You look around, but nothings there.

3. Upstairs- You look at the rickety old staircase and quickly head up. Whatever you saw earlier is still haunting your thoughts. Once you’re upstairs the lights turn on automatically and you jump up and let out a startled squeak. You run blindly down the hall and run into a dark figure. You fall on the floor and look up, but whatever it was is gone. You scramble to your hands and knees and spring forward to your feet. You go left at a turn and then right to see the figure of a person. You scream and turn around another way. After several more twists and turns you stop for breath and look behind you. You realize that you are lost and start to feel a sinking feeling in your heart. You turn around and scream. The person is in front of you. It’s a man, around 6’2 feet. He has broad shoulders and is clean shaven. He is wearing an expensive white dress shirt, with the top three buttons open, black slacks, and dress shoes. You look up at his face. His hair is a dirty blonde, long and tied back into a ponytail, but all this doesn’t matter because you see a hint of fang and brilliant crimson eyes. You scream again and run in the opposite direction. Almost instantly, he is in front of you. Again, you scream and turn around and again, he blocks you. You quickly duck around him and sprint forward. You look behind you, but he’s not there. Then, you look forward and a little ways away you spot him. You quickly dodge into the room directly to your right and lock the door.

4. The Room- You stand in front of the door and strain your ears for any sound. Once, you think he is gone you search the wall for a light switch and quickly turn it on. You wait for your eyes to adjust and realize that there are no windows, just a red velvet couch with a small table on either side. This takes up all of the wall space to your left and to your right a black coffin with silver trim and hinges. You jump back and desperately hope that you are not in the same room with dead person. You open the lid and find... (answer to question below) ...You feel the inside and realize it’s well cushioned and a little shiver passes through your spine. All the sudden you turn around and see the vampire.
a red pillow and red satin sheets.
a black pillow and black satin sheets.
a red pillow with black linen sheets and red trim.





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